Belonging and Alienation.

[Kingox]

Here is an image I made for my english class at school. Please tell me what you think and give critisism, Thanks.

Im not sure what the colour of the text. :D

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http://www.bonedaddy.net/kingox/belongandalien.jpg

[genesis]

belonging and allienation looks good in green but the smaller text is either not clear because of green or just is not clear, could be cleared up a bit. The rest, image itself is pretty nice.

[Snake]

everything looks good, i just think you should play around with the text color till you find one that looks good

[Kingox]

I can't play with it anymore :( the original file got messed with, So Id have to start again if I where to do that :(

[.:BVM:.]

thats pretty good 7/10

[Kingox]

Thanks, Im running our of ideas.